unfinished song for project criticism would be nice

[Qam]

if anyones heard my other peice "child" then this is from the same project, but this one is unfinished I just need to know if theres anything I should change/add. thank you.

[johnrowley]

Did not seem to download at all, but would love to hear it.

[grayb47]

Rhythm flowed pretty well. I think a 2 note harmony slower than what you have would work well in this. If its not strictly a guitar piede I would sugest slow strings in the background and maybe a little flute or ocarina mixed with the melody in places.