heres my sing i wrote..

[daniellej277]

BOY SO FINE

oh we boy do ya know the joy i feel when i look in your eyes im

hypnotised im wise to the games your playin with me so boy so

fine why dont ya swing my way i know we can hit it off just right i

need your lovin cause its so sweet i know your the one for me

tonights the night i aint holdin nothin back i dont give a damn

what anybody says

(chorous)why dont ya swing my way boy so fine

oh please swing my way boy ohho boy so fine i know your the

one for me boy so fine we can hit it off just right.....

[G-man]

Cool!
...so how does this song go? Any music for it yet?
Any ideas... Does anybody have any feedback for this?
If we offer any suggestions do we get a cut when you are the next big star? :laugh2:


BOY SO FINE

oh we boy do ya know the joy i feel

when i look in your eyes im hypnotised

im wise to the games your playin with me

so boy so fine why dont ya swing my way

i know we can hit it off just right

i need your lovin cause its so sweet

i know your the one for me

tonights the night i aint holdin nothin back

i dont give a damn what anybody says


(chorous)
y dont ya swing my way boy so fine

oh please swing my way boy ohho

[daniellej277]

yes i would love feedback and your damn right id give you a cut i love you guys you all rock g2g feel free to e mail me you all
daniellej27741@mykernmail.com

[daniellej277]

FAR AWAY

Do u look into his eyes and try not ta cry ya know he dosent love

you the way that you love him does his smile seem ta fade when

you look at his face does your world seem blue when he turns

away from you but you know some day far away someone will

love you now your sitin in the dark cryin cause he broke your

heart and you know some day far away someone ...........will love

you oh ho some one......will.......love.......you...

(heres another song I wrote):cool:

[daniellej277]

IF YOU LOVED ME (solo)

you said youd never leave me and youd always be with me

look at you now now where are you now that youve come back in

my life you expect me not to cry when you say i love you if you

loved me then why did you leave me if you loved me why didnt

you call to let me know you werent coming home to me when i

was all alone if you loved me why did you break my heart and

leave me with this pain after all this time i feel its a crime to my

heart because i still love you i just think if you loved me you

would have done these things

(soloist&chorous)

if you loved me you would have been there when i needed you if

you loved me you would have cried with me if you loved me you

would have shown it baby i cant go back to you cause i dont

wanna hurt like that no more sorry i cant love you no more

(solo)

if you love me leave and never return

..... heres another song i wrote enjoy.....

[daniellej277]

so i wrote a lyric poem

PAIN-------

i hate when people pass judgement on me it hurts me bad i want

to cry i havent cryed in so long i feel so sad from all the pain ive

kept locked away for so long i feel like craweling in a dark hole

and hiding so noone can find me and hurt me

theres so much on my mind i feel like he77

i wanna scream so loud & let it out i think no one would care

i got an ugly taste of reality and couldnt handel it so i cried

i fear no one would care if i died i dont even know who my

friends are anymore my dreams seem so far below me now

[Sierradoll]

hey that is good so far im making my own song too
so what kind of song is it supposed to be?(rap, rock, pop, etc.)

[daniellej277]

thanks its a rock song

[swit_angel]

hey that's nice... :)

[dobby]

cool song.

[voice of god]

thats a great sing u write. :D

[pyroeragon]

That song is pretty good! Its way better than anything i could write.

[fra_chel]

You are talented!! My congrats!!

[alycia]

Originally posted by daniellej277
BOY SO FINE

oh we boy do ya know the joy i feel when i look in your eyes im

hypnotised im wise to the games your playin with me so boy so

fine why dont ya swing my way i know we can hit it off just right i

need your lovin cause its so sweet i know your the one for me

tonights the night i aint holdin nothin back i dont give a damn

what anybody says

(chorous)why dont ya swing my way boy so fine

oh please swing my way boy ohho boy so fine i know your the

one for me boy so fine we can hit it off just right.....

that song is perfect for my life right now...there's this guy from track. his name's Justin.

[Dedsant]

great lyrics, keep rocking :cool: